3.We have a direct sailing from Hong Kong to San Francisco.
(2)注意词语所放的位置:
例如:
We shall be able to supply 10 cases of the item only.
前者则有两种商品以上的含义。
(3)注意句子的结构:
例如:
We sent you 5 samples yesterday of the goods which you requested in your letter of May 20 by air.
We sent you, by air, 5 samples of the goods which you requested in your letter of May 20.
5、Conciseness 简洁
(1)避免废话连篇:
例如:
.We wish to acknowledge receipt of your letter...可改为:We appreciate your letter...
.Enclosed herewith please find two copies of...可改为: We enclose two copies of...
(2)避免不必要的重复:
(3)短句、单词的运用:
Enclosed herewith----->enclosed
at this time----->now
due to the fact that----->because
a draft in the amount of $1000----->a draft for $1000
6、Concreteness 具体
7、Correctness 正确